melancholy.

i miss the warmth
 of love...
 the open palm
 upon my cheek
 that says.. "you are of me
 you are cherished and whole
 and perfect as you are"



i miss the taste
 of love...
 warm cinnamon caramel
 coating the soul
 the moment it hits your palate


i miss my belief
 in love...
 my inner knowledge
 that everything that should be
 will
 in its proper time

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God what you do with words to make them feel like so different to taste and feel..
You are of me..you are cherished and whole and perfect..so you are
Miss the taste of love..miss my belief..My knowing that everything
that should be will be in time..
What loveliness..magic I see
lovely write..

[~Shadow Kissed~]

Totally good :)

[deleted]

Love is a beautiful thing! We all are due a serving of it and will have it in due time. Excellent read and very well structured piece. Good job!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Cinnamon Caramel ?
Geeeeezz ! Never heard it like that.

This is a nice little poem
I like the structure. Love is love is -----
But, the structure and the economy o f words
is really refreshing. You are very easy to read.

My Rating ------ 100 %

-----John