thirst.

i am one who needs
to feel the palm of love
ghosting over eager flesh;

it has been far too long
and this arid drought
has drained my parched lips
of all moisture once left
by your midnight kisses

Reviews

[MAC]

you used one of my favorite poetry words "arid". okay I am smitten by your works. going into my favs

[Chris]

I can hear this as I look - through - your driftwood image at Mental Plaque, I can feel the image shimmer as the waves rock the pieces...

Anyway... great aftertaste with this one

[Sami Khalil]

This was splendid...:)...........................