quietitude.

i look down empty hallways,
lit by afternoon blankets of light;
reminded of your smile,
and my always urge to fill it
with the words of my lips
and the now of my flesh,
i ache incessantly
because i know those hollow smiles
were never mine to begin with
even though i burned
burned with the want
to know just how
their hunting bow curves
would slide along my hipbone

Reviews

[Mr.Boffin]

great piece of can feel the pain and emotion seeping through!

[Sami Khalil]

"i ache incessantly
because i know those hollow smiles
were never mine to begin with
even though i burned
burned with the want "

I feel with your aching and realizations...Bravo.................