To Be A Ghost

just feelings....

Dare to compare me to them?

You know nothing of it

You don't know how it feels to go everyday knowing that the ignorant b*****d that stole everything from me is still out there

Out there taking more things from innocent people

Things that are so sacred and precious

Things that should be left alone

You don't know how it feel to see blood poor from any unexposed portion of my body

How it feels to see the scars laying on the skin thats done nothing to deserve the pain and agony that you have caused me

How it feels to have the one thing that can not be given back taken away by someone you trusted

How it feels to be a ghost...

A ghost left out in the cold, cruel world with no one to protect her

No one to tell her that everything is going to be alright and that they love her

I've been told so many time that I won't get hurt

I'm starting to think that getting hurt is the only reason I am here

People were just put here to get hurt

I'll never be loved for real

Everyone will just do the samething to me

Tell me it's ok

Win the key to my heart

Then rip it into trillions of pieces

I'll be the one left behind to heal it myself

So many times i have lost tiny pieces of my heart

These pieces can never be recovered

They will be lost in the darkness of cold and cruel hearts

Never to return again

Reviews

[Jeff Miller]

This is sad, but very good! I'm sorry for the experiences you've had that make you such a good writer. Good Job!

[Bright Eyes]

I really like this. It has a lot of emotion in it and good illustration. You said on your bio that you aren't a very good writer but this piece makes me beg to differ. You obviously have the ability to turn feelings into words. Good job, keep it up.

[Astrid Hamilton]

...and this one made me cry...

[Skelasoldier]

Very nice, keep up the good work.