I'm Really Sorry.

I could write two thousand apologies,

I could pray; I could get down on my knees

would any of it change your mind?

I could sob until my body's dry,

quietly at first,

and then louder, until everyone can hear me cry
Do you think that would suffice?

if it doesn't, then I promise

for you I'd put my heart on ice

and give it right up, without a doubt

because it's only your name I want to shout.

unchanged is what the past will stay

unfortunately, it's always getting in our way

Author's Note

not finished

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I could sob until my body's dry

Nice line, this has a really good voice to it - keep writing it, I really like it.