A New Love

I know the way my body speaks to you is confusing.
And all the ways you try to get to know me are tiring your light.
But I hope you don't give up.
I hope you try and try.
Because I promise you, I'm trying too.
Trying to make sense of what it is my heart is saying.
And why it feels it can't move on.
Trying to make sense of the static of your fingers,
Crossing the corners of my back.
Deciding on whether this was built from fate and not settled through lack.
Your golden heart, those baby blues.
I want to intertwine with you.
Please be true,
Please be true.
I promise I'll love all of you.

Reviews

[RJ]

A very to-the-point and touching piece hun, I love it.

[Christopher Robin]

..." Said Bella to Edward, not out loud, just sifting through the confusing tangle of emotions that kept clouding her mind. He'd been so distant lately, was that in her mind too, or was she driving him away?

Sorry, got lost as to which version I was reading ;)

-Robin

[SmittyJas]

Sweet poem brought me to a cheer for the love so fair. May it begin a love so bliss.