Love's Harmony

I talked to my angels and they said you are love.

They showed me a picture of the stars you look up.

And told me they form my silhouette. 

I asked them then why I am here

and you are gone.

And they showed me another picture, 

but this time of a song.

The first line was low, and touched the depths of my soul.

The second, similar, but had a lighter tone.

By the third all I could see were bursts of pink,

with a soft blue melody intertwining the keys.

And between the ebb and flow of harmony and discord.

I understood what the angels were telling me..

You are a song, my heart was meant to sing.

Remind me how to play our keys. 

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Your a romantic at heart. love this take on loves songs and reaching out to touch the others hands for romance should be lead by one soul kiss.

[Kuandio]

Very refreshing to read something so openly spiritual. There are many nice lines, and at the end it all comes together as to the title and theme of harmony. You sound like you are one of the old souls, very connected to the harmony

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

This lows so softly and beautifully, like you are speaking a whisper or telling a secret. I enjoyed it very much! :)

[Stonz P.]

Now I am so glad I sneaked to look at your poetry. This is just what poetry is all about.. Love, its beauty, its omnipresence... The imagery made me yearn, especially the silhouette one..
Your structuring and flow is natural..
And very less do I encounter free poets..
I'm a free thinker myself.
Wonderful write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the thoughts and the flow of the poem.
"You are a song, my heart was meant to sing.
Remind me how to play our keys. "
The above lines are perfect and beautiful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

There is a soft tone to your words that truly is lovely. The imagery is just as beautiful...and the last line took my breath away. Stunning poetry.

:) Julie