Blinded

My love, oh my love

I got tangled in the stars again..

My love, oh my love

Show me the way back home..

 

Am I lost?

Am I found?

I can’t hear my angels' voices through all of this doubt

I look around and my world is not what it once was

I can’t find the ground to plant all of my love

So I let it free, I let it fly

Not ever knowing who its touched and why

Do the answers ever come or is confusion all I need?

 

My love, oh my love

Who am I to be?

My love, oh my love

Wrap your faith around me

 

I can’t see..

I can’t see..

What my soul is showing me

 I can't breath..

I can't breath..

With all these unsaid words choking me

 

 

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I read this several times...

I got tangled in the stars again...a dreamer perhaps..."tangled in the stars" which are much more beautiful than reality...and yet we must face reality and possibly something that is a bit difficult...something we cannot or don't want to face. I'm not sure if this where the poem came from, but it is where it took me.
Your writing is lovely. I look foreward to reading more of your work.
:) Julie

[Illumina]

'I can't breath, I can't breath, with all these unsaid words choking me", I especially loved these lines.
Loved your poem, it's really beautiful. Good work!

[New Theory]

A dreamy poem, almost like I was stuck in one, feeling that choked up as in the last few lines. Good portrayal of the feeling of being left alone. Good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of word and thoughts. The poem had the feel of the ancient Poets about love. Love was everything and everything was love. I enjoyed the complete poem. Best poetry is about love. We need to know the safeness of love to make our life complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you so much!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Eve Ola]

another amazing piece. em loving it. well done

[Natalie Dieudonne]

WOW! This was so beautiful and mesmerizing. I love this piece so much. I could feel every word flow through me if that makes any sense.

I can’t see..
I can’t see..
What my soul is showing me
I can't breath..
I can't breath..
With all these unsaid words choking me

Amazing!!!!

[Monica M.]

"So I let it free, I let it fly" is my favorite line. You cant help but feel struggle that you portray in the last stanza. I love this kind of writing! This is a goodie!