The Forbidden Life

I will set the birds free with little notes of you

And little notes of me

And in the midst of winds musicality,

I will plant my feet in the soil that connects you and me

 

So that no matter how high our heads fly

Or how deep our souls seek

You will still be you

And I will still be me

In our universe of three

 

The tether of here and there no more

The waves of our forbidden vessels settle with the ones on the shore

And love will once again be felt in the all earth’s core

 

The forbidden life no longer what it seems

As two divine souls finally meet 

Reviews

[Chris Micha]

Beautiful job, Rose. You capture the spirits of two in a splendid manner! :)

[Everett DeValle]

A deep and soulful poem...poignant yet eloquent in your emotions. Excellent.

[New Theory]

You have gotta be kidding me, I read 3 of your poems back to back and each poem is a gem, usually I like just one, but here all are good and not just good, truly beautiful pieces .

[Natalie Dieudonne]

The forbidden life no longer what it seems
As two divine souls finally meet

Such a perfect way to end this beautiful piece!
Nice work!

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you very much :)

[trooper48]

I love this. Anything with Soul in it has me caught, Well done and keep writing.

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :)

[Clockwork]

This one has a glorious message about connecting with the divinity of other people. I get the feel the speaker has found a soul mate or a twin soul, and has realized how to make the most out of that connection. Truly Beautiful words!

[Awakened Rose]

Who knows what I've found! But I sure can't stop writing about someone lol thank you :)

[Clockwork]

You're welcome :-)