Stars Align

He opened me up to a galaxy of love
And I'd spend more than time floating around our  little universe
Of love so vast, so bright, no words could defy or relate
It was infinite. Unspeakable.
Only felt in the most precious parts of the soul.

We unraveled each other.
With a knowing that all the shapes and edges we fearlessly freed 
Will come together in a dance of cosmic synchronicities

And awaken a flame, a portal we found from traveling through love

floating,
dreaming,
spinning,

In our little universe only we knew of

Reviews

[RJ]

Ahh the microcosm of love. I'd normally agree with you on all fronts but allow me to play the devils advocate if you will; maybe, when love is as potent as you describe in many of your pieces, the beauty and the precious nature of it comes from it's very, very finite nature. The fact that nothing lasts and none of us is perfect forever is what makes life worth living. Haha, ok I'm done disagreeing now; it was a lovely piece and I, as usual, am eagerly awaiting your next.

[Awakened Rose]

I don't think your review disagrees at all! My writing speaks upon the purity of love because I am aware of the infinite/finite nature of love. And I feel having that awareness brings balance in the way I love and how I express love. The fact that nothing lasts forever is a very infinite concept in my eyes. and in this poem I express the different contrasts, the infinite/finite by writing about love as this vast universe while expressing the intimacy of a love that vast. Hence the "our little universe only we knew of"

Thank you for enjoying my work and taking the time to write your thoughts, I very much appreciate it :)

[Daydreamer]

Awww! Definitely an exquisite portray of love.
I love all the details and I love as well, the mindset you had while writing this was of an incredibly intoxicated and overwhelmed lover and these portrays convey so much honesty and impress the readers.😊
carry on💚💛💜

[Great Aunt Astri]

'Little universe Of love so vast, so bright, no words could defy or relate'. But your poem gives us a wonderful feeling and insight to your love. Well written.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Wow, this is romantic. Glad I stumbled across your work. ^-^

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :)

[Clockwork]

In those sort of moments, I think we touch the most pure energy in the universe. The communion of two people acts as a bridge to the most pure energy we have ever know, a feeling almost beyond words. I think in those moments, we glimpse the pure energy of all things.

I like how you describe that universe, that bond with your lover, as a portal in the third stanza. I also like how you describe feeling opened to a galaxy of love, which suggests the ability to transcendentally create. That ability replaces what you were before, which is represented in the unraveling you write about in stanza two.

I greatly appreciate how you see and feel the world.

[Awakened Rose]

Exactly:) I'm glad our words have resonance with one another. Thank you so much for your amazing reviews! You see and you know. That's beautiful

[Clockwork]

So am I. When I read you, I live what you're writing. Also, I just feel the energy.

[Stephen]

Again ... A romantic one write. I do find many sympathy around the piece which speaking up to me ..dragging out in my heart that love`s still alive into the kind hearts. Well done! I admire this extraordinary write!

[StrixNebulosa]

Quite lovely... I understand this "infinite", "unspeakable" state... its much more than a feeling, but a knowing, an understanding. I love how you try to pin it down with "little universe"... something so vast that its reaches are undefined, therefor obsolete. yet it does seem to be that way "little" because somehow you know every inch of it... anyhoo, a breathtaking pen you have here... thank you for sharing.

[Awakened Rose]

wow. Perfect review! Thank you so much for reading :) Its always nice when someone grasps your poem the way you want your reader too.

[A. Amos]

Great write and above last lines were killer...good job my friend

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :)