A Destined Request

A Destined Request

A Poem by Awakened Rose

Is that you knocking on the door, my love? 

I creak it open to take a peak and find no one standing there but love 

oh how much love was in the air.

I shut the door fast, just before my mind ran miles through the future and drowned in the past. 
But darkness lurked through with purpose and showed me all I needed to see. 
And I looked fear in the face and smiled at the image of Me.

I let my soul breath
my heart sing
my head be

I heard another knock on the door. And as I was about to turn the knob of fate, 
my heart skipped a beat and danced through a few more. 
And I no longer questioned what was behind that door. 


I knew it was you, my love.

© 2014 Awakened Rose


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I heard another knock on the door.

Those are the lines that stayed with mw

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely sentiments here and I love that the door was opened and only "love" was there. Nice contrast with the "knob of hate" in the final stanza too. Enjoyed this :) Penny

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awakened Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
This is so beautiful and your lines are flawless and so well penned :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awakened Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on April 17, 2014
Last Updated on April 17, 2014
Tags: Love, spiritual, beauty, peace

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My name is Tayler Jenkins. I love to write because it connects me to the soul of the universe and allows me to emanate that out to the world. more..

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