Fluidity

Last night I tried to act as if you’ve,

never made my eyes swell and nerves,

pump suicide.

I bared it all; opening myself like an,

Envelope with no return sender,

no hope for a letter.

When you laid there next to me, allowing,

your ego to show itself like my breasts,

un-hid from you I hoped you’d choke,

on all the lovers spit you carry inside,

of your soul.

 

Reviews

[brigid]

wow! that is amazingly written...so many good words and feelings...love the lines.... í hoped you'd choke on all the lovers spit you carry inside of your soul'....so venomous and powerful. great writing

[jenkey83]

Thank you!!

[brigid]

you are welcome