Experimental Story (Untitled)

A Book by JenJen

Nonlinear short story about a teacher's ghostly encounter.

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© 2013 JenJen

Author's Note

I wrote this about a year ago to see what writing a ghost story is like. It has some continuity errors that I never bothered fixing and I'm not sure if the nonlinear structure really serves a definite purpose, but it was good practice in completing a story and now it will be good practice for submitting one :) Any comments are welcomed and appreciated! Thank you!

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char

The nonlinear thing was very confusing. But of all the chapters, I'd have to say chapter 2 is my favorite. You should expand on it. I love the "What the hell...?" feeling it gives off.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading my work! I'm glad you liked that chapter--I wanted it to be intriguin.. read more

12 Years Ago

Your welcome :) Think about going in depth with that chapter.

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Added on February 17, 2013
Last Updated on February 17, 2013
Tags: ghosts, horror

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I love horror movies, Nietzsche, spinach, my dog Hannibal and Bill Cosby. Life is really good! I used to work as a writing consultant and it was tha best job eva! So if you have something you need .. more..

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