Plea

Wrapped in a blanket safe from the cold ~ still shivering inside
I can't break free, it's crushing down on me ~ ripping me apart
Aching for comfort, I whimper a plea
The knots inside are driving me insane
I toss and turn trying to escape
Sweet slumber, take me in your embrace
I can not take this pain another day
Confusion whirls around in my head
Clutching to sanity, I fall to my knees, throw up my arms and scream
A small rumble of the storm that grows inside, yearning to be free~

Reviews

[William Maisonave]

its amazing how writing, or any other art form, is most powerfully expressed when we are experiencing emotion at it's rawest...expression is the need to release these feelings... so powerful, overwhelming. The pages listen to me, to you, and it is only at the tip of a pen that I've known true honesty.
thank you for a beautiful read

[MAC]

Raw and emotional....excellent!

[Alexander]

Dayum Jen. That is as beautiful as it is worrying. I sure hope you wrote this in an intense emotional moment to deal with your feelings of that time and not because things are getting out of hand somehow. Either way, still very beautiful and intense.

[SilentVerses]

Delectable storms rumble across the sky of your harrowing words, telling a tale of despair, as emotional turmoil turns a sickness through your depths, feelings and meaning submerge you with their strong hands and desperate to escape a scream is torn from you, within your mind a cacophony of sound is emitted and you claw at it in wanton desolation, an exterior slowly unraveling due to the agitation within. Beautifully sad a simple melody runs parallel to the maddened noise as you try and run with the bird of elegance.

[Tamryn]

I really liked this, full of emotion. Excellent.