the duet

why do i have this feeling in my heart?

i think about him every time.

why can't i get his picture off my mind?

this love, it slowly grows inside.

in his eyes, i see a thousand angels.

when i hear his voice, i hear a melody.

in my dreams, i dream of him and me.

i love him.

she is the woman i will marry.

i know that we were meant to be.

i was called by destiny to share my life,

to share my love.

in her eyes, i see a bright tomorrow.

when i hear her voice, i hear a symphony.

in my dreams, i dream of her and me.

i love her.

in his eyes, i see a thousand angels (a bright tomorrow)

when i hear his voice, i hear a melody (a symphony)

all my dreams come true when you are with me

i love you.

i love you.

Reviews

[Tony]

You gotta be a Gemini......
?
Great Job on this! I have only read a couple of your poems, and I am pleased to tell you that I detect a style.
Individual... new, out of the norm, randomness...

good times, thanks for posting!
:]

[oxo]

i'm a saguittarius- from the old zodiac, ophiucus from the new one. does it matter? :)

i like the way you describe my style, "out of the norm" and "randomness". hahah
actually, im still trying to 'find my sound'.
:)

[DrD]

Experimental and daring, this mirror image dialogue gives us a new look at form and design and I thought it was fascinating. Very well done.

[oxo]

thank you :)

[LA Lorena]

An interesting write from two perspectives, with the final stanza being a conjoined voice...very creative!

[oxo]

thank you :)