there's still time

i composed this song long before. maybe i could add this up to my stuff.

i see you closer 

and i'm feeling fine

i hear you whisper, 

and the music's so right.

you wake me from nightmare all of a sudden;

now you're here in my life.

for you i'll wake my dreams again

for you i'll be the best that i can.

i'll leave the scars and the pain behind me

i'll follow the road ahead of me

cause you're there

you are mine,

and i'll never waste anything again, 

there's still time.

the pain that i suffered, 

you melt it away.

your voice is my strength now, 

please say you will stay

i'm here with you always and i will love you; 

come i'll hold you now.

for you i'll wake my dreams again

for you i'll be the best that i can.

i'll leave the scars and the pain behind me

i'll follow the road ahead of me

cause you're there

you are mine,

and i'll never waste anything again, 

there's still time.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem. Very soothing...

[oxo]

thanks, i wrote this with a broken heart years ago, and how i felt good after i finished writing this.

[Sami Khalil]

I like it. Thank you for sharing.

[PokemonFan#1]

*Sniffle* Beautiful! ^-^ I really enjoyed reading these lyrics.

Keep it up!
(^_−)−☆

[oxo]

thanks, really. :)

[PokemonFan#1]

You're very welcome~ :D

[TNB]

I like the way you express your thoughts. It's almost like I could hear the music that you had in mind for this song. The use of your words is a very unique style to me so that's a bonus. Your song draws me in and I like that. I'm very sceptical about most songs but your's has certainly met all my expectations on how a song should be. Keep up the great work. feel free to check out mine and let me know your opinion if you wish.

Sincerely, TNB

[oxo]

thank you so much. i'll check out yours too. thank you. :)