do you

do you

A Poem by jenelma

do you know
how it feel
when you are alone

do you know
how it feel
people say things wrong

do you know 
how it feel
when you don't have a home

do you know 
how it feel 
when you are gone

do you know 
how it feel
when you walking alone

do you know
how it fell
when people talk behind your back

do you?
do you?

do you know how it feel?
tell me
if you want to.

© 2015 jenelma


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jenelma
i hope you like it

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Shows that you have more of an artistic eye, and your writing is more of a 'Graphic' one, for you let people see the actual vision with your architecture.

Its a matter of re-inventing Poetry; l guess you too know how to draw Potraits, Observations and still Life (ART). Well, l enjoyed that pyramid like shape, forming rhythms- creating different mood in each lapse; hope to see more of your work!!

Keep on working with shapes; geometrical lines- to bring a desired effect, and, above all, pay a little bit of time to Punctuation; it can make your exceptional work to go in vain!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Shows that you have more of an artistic eye, and your writing is more of a 'Graphic' one, for you let people see the actual vision with your architecture.

Its a matter of re-inventing Poetry; l guess you too know how to draw Potraits, Observations and still Life (ART). Well, l enjoyed that pyramid like shape, forming rhythms- creating different mood in each lapse; hope to see more of your work!!

Keep on working with shapes; geometrical lines- to bring a desired effect, and, above all, pay a little bit of time to Punctuation; it can make your exceptional work to go in vain!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am Jenelma and I'm 12 year old. I like to write poems. My favorite things is to read manga book and watch anime. THAT ME! more..

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