soul ties

soul ties

A Story by she makes me weird
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another for ms. jenacini

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 i knew i wanted her...

or at least to be with her

it started the second she opened the door

her smile lit up the darkness

there was a twinkle in her eyes

bouncing off walls and into my mind

leaving a trace of her scent

she was contagious

i didn't want to leave her presence

and surprisingly, she asked me to stay

 

i knew i liked her

when she'd talk nonsense

yet it made complete sense to me

i felt the need to be next to her

to give her what she wanted

to stay up for days and nights

laughing and oh,

the whatnot

she would reach across me

she's all that i could see

shirt unbuttoned and pantless

my smile went on for miles

 

i knew i loved her

when she disappeared

i had to get better

i couldn't lose her once i found her

she was still as close as my skin

yet hundreds of miles away

appearing in every thought

seeing her again

the overwhelming feelings

floating in bliss

dreaming about her

wanting but to only be with her

next to her

laughing and loving life

 

it's starting to make sense...

she's my soulmate

 

© 2008 she makes me weird


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This is beautiful. i must say the imagery is amazing and i love the feeling that there was a bond understood between you two and only you 2....this is amazing
Great Write!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


she was still as close as my skin
yet hundreds of miles away

I know I have felt this feeling so many times...
What a wonderful sense of love you have created here! What a beautiful picture...



Posted 16 Years Ago


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Oh i love this... So much feeling it flowed beautifully, finding our soul mate is hard but when it happens... you just know.... fantastic, gorgeous write

x

Posted 16 Years Ago



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she makes me weird

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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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