whatnot - you're my addiction

this piece can be taken in many different ways...the common factor is the addiction...whatever it may be.

i crave you

i need you

i want you

i went out searching for you

the feeling of desperation overtook my whole being

i thought i may not be able to find you

where could you be? 

you always wait for me on that corner

we sneek away into the dark

rain or shine

i know you're all mine

i hide you away

unsure of what the others will say

just give them time

they will learn to love you

to crave you

to need you

to want you

the introduction is the hard part

will they judge me for loving you?

you just have to work your magic

i'll simply explain this to them...

you get better the more i know you

you always make me feel better

you show me new worlds

you give me the energy i need

you make me rich

i laugh with you

i cry with you

you run through my blood

you're constantly in my head

you're my best friend

i would do anything for you...

even if it meant hurting others i love

i'd get up for you at anytime

i will protect you when others want to abuse you

i'd go to prison for you

i'd die for you

i crave you

i need you

i want you

in a baggie with hearts

i hide you away deep in my pocket

but only until we are alone, my love....

you are my addiction

my drug of choice

 

Author's Note

who can relate?

Reviews

[emz]

Most definately.... there is nothing worse than a love that has to be hidden from the world... discrimination and predjudice are vile traits... this story is so powerful and so full of love... if only everyone could accept it for what it is, no matter what colour creed or religion... and all it really is.. is love.

I truly loved this



x

[KatiePie]

This was full of emotion and power, beautifully written and wonderfully constructed, I really enjoyed reading this.
-Cathrine

[Word Mutiny]

very straightforward, very true. i dig how you just totally get it.
"i crave you
i need you
i want you
in a baggie with hearts
i hide you away deep in my pocket
but only until we are alone, my love....
you are my addiction
my drug of choice"
it just seems to me like something cobain would write.
not to make comparisons though, just an observation.
i love this :))

[Angel's Lady]

You're my drug of choice.

Wow. No truer words were ever written! Great write.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

can definitely relate - it's a scary and an addictive feeling. still can't figure out whether it's the best thing or the worst thing in the world haha :)

hugs