confused and dazed

quick thoughts i had to get out...i think it may not be complete though...

confused and dazed

i stumble through this haze

i can't find the exit

you stuck me in a maze

you're a puzzle

i'm putting you together

but a piece is missing -

i can't complete you

help me find the missing piece

or remain forever incomplete

 

 

Reviews

[Sweetest Sin]

"I can't complete you" - This sentence alone feels like a question, like you are asking for the other persons help.

"help me find the missing piece or remain forever incomplete" - Fabulous choice of words! Such love for another human being, asking and realizing that the other person involved needs to contribute something to make the puzzle complete. Super-smart wording and realization. I like it!!

[Rock*Star]

short and simple.. yet complex... to be the missing piece and the other half will never know.. great write!

[wizthom]

love is a boom that never blooms too soon ,yes i like ur style ,,greeting cards,of i love u ,
peace wizthom

[emz]

simple words that say so much.... people are so hard to figure out.. a bit of help sometimes would be nice...lovely x

[Angel's Lady]

confused and dazed
i stumble through this haze

Ahh, sweet mystery of life! You have managed to paint a very vivid picture and you did so very eloquently! Very nicely written. Great job.

[whispersoftly]

Oh to figure out another person is the most complicated puzzle of all....

felt your confusion....

it was greatly expressed ;-)

[Druscilla Morgan]

Beautiful write, direct in it's simplicity....overstating nothing yet saying everything...

"help me find the missing piece
or remain forever incomplete"

great ending!! :-))