the final fantasy

you shouldn't play full force if you don't want the game to end

 

so here it is for all to see

yes, quite different than what we shared

yet, still honest and heartfelt

i should have listened to my instincts

they yelled for me to stop

but the way you loved what i said

the way you responded

the way you encouraged me

well, it kept me going

truth is, i don't want it to stop

i want to undress you

with my eyes? 

with my hands? 

both

i want to push you against the wall

attempting to catch my breath through the

uh..oh...uuu...mmmms

watching you wear just a smile

crawling across the bed

looking into my eyes

you could ruin me

in a good way

ah, how you intice me to go on

but i must stop

the fantasy must end...

at least as you know it

permission to continue backstage?

 

 

Reviews

[Flow]

I feel us writers often transfer our creative powers into someone or something that we then call a muse. The only real problem with that is that person has control over our creative spirit and they can shut us down so easily. Is this person the only reason why write? Does any part of it reflect that you write for you as well? Inspiration is all around us, but honestly it comes from within us in the first place. Stop the fantasy but let your pen write your desires as your ink is rich with wanting desires that we enjoy reading. Excellent poem :)

[Angel's Lady]

You certainly write to tease, titillate, and seduce...Great job of doing all three! Your words literally crawl across the page...