trying to read you

trying to read you

A Poem by she makes me weird
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this one's for Brighteyes

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you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing

and to think, our paths crossed not long ago

entertaining me with jokes and smart remarks

you always leave me with a smile i can't seem to hide...

and open ended thoughts

leaving me to decide

is it all just a game or are there feelings behind he jokes

you keep me wondering

waiting

anticipating

the next moment i'll be graced with your presence

© 2008 she makes me weird


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i agree with your first reviewer:
"you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing" was the ticket.
you could win any girls heart with this- take it from a girl

Posted 16 Years Ago


"you're amazingly beautiful and beautifully amazing"
I like this first line the most!
Very heart warming and great feel! Awesome work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


you always leave me with a smile i can't seem to hide... AND isn't that the most amazing feeling? I love that! Very dynamically written! Very powerful and very beautiful! Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2008

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she makes me weird
she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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