who are you?

who are you?

A Poem by she makes me weird

 

unable to describe the eminating beauty

i'm trying to fight the feeling

but i've fallen into you

what do i do

i looked into your eyes

i saw into your soul

i will give you everything i have

in an attempt to pay the toll

© 2008 she makes me weird


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emz
perfection... just completely love.... i loved this.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Yep...that's how love makes you feel for sure! Words like these surely must be how the first poems were written - pure unadulterated passion, put down in the simplest of forms, written for those lucky individuals whose hearts have stolen the writers' hearts! Simply delightful and beautifully written! Wonderful job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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she makes me weird
she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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