God's hand

 

i see you there

but you seem so far away

how do i get to you

everything seems to be standing in my way

chaos is to my left and destruction to my right

everything around me becomes blurry

as my soul sees you clearly

i hear you say

I am here

i reach out my hands as to not stumble

as i call out for your help

i feel your presence moving towards me

all the voices fade away

as i think exhaustion is going to overtake me

i feel your strong yet gentle hand steady me

and your arms lift me up to the place where i belong

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

i feel your strong yet gentle hand steady me - this is the feeling I think we all search for at one time or another in one way or another...
Very beautifully written...a very powerful statement! Great job!

[EvesDaughter]

this is such an inspirational write.
I love it. It has the soothing
quality of a prayer.

[WritefromtheHeart]

Oh goodness...this is simply gorgeous and touches not only my heart, but my soul as well!! I love the point of view, the perspective of a lost child, and aren't we all...lost....at some time or another?? Truly an excellent write!! Bravo!

[Annebelle Ashire]

...I've fallen many a time...
..but it's not relation nor sympathy you seek...
I find myself feeling just that..

Find a way to always return to Him,
..it will serve you well to do so..