Cutting Deeper

Cutting Deeper

A Poem by Jennifer Venter

 

 

This pain I feel goes deeper than any wound

The cut does heel, but the heart still ill

This pain I have hurts more than the gash upon my arm

The pain I have keeps on creeping deeper into my heart

 

Pain does not take away hurt

Nor can hurt take away pain

 

I cut to see what pain I can handle

I cut to see how much I can cry

Maybe I cut to see if I could die

I cut aloud so some one could hear me cry

 

 

I scream the silent scream; Help me out, dear God O please

I need your stronger hand today, help me through this difficult way

 

Hold my hand away from the blade

Hold it back, Cant this pain fade?

Hold my hand so I can do no wrong

Hold my hand so I can sing your song

Hold my hand to the new day

Hold my hand, so I can stay

Hold my hand dear God O please

 

 

© 2008 Jennifer Venter


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You are a very talented writer my dear! I felt all your pain though this poem!
It was very well artisticly writen from the depths of your soul!
As I write in all my writings: Tough times never last but tough people always do!
You have shown yourself to be the latter because you suvived all this pain and now chose to share it for the good of all mankind!
Keep writing from your soul for the good of all souls!
If you get a chance please read my story and poems. I think we have a lot in common!
Good luck with all oyur future writings!
Always a friend!
TIM

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Okay I have a confession. I am a FAN! Wow another poem to my favorite. This was an amzing write. This had a song like quality to it. Please except my friend request so that I can read more of your material that you post out. Congrats on your talent and the williness to share with others. Peace and good night.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a very talented writer my dear! I felt all your pain though this poem!
It was very well artisticly writen from the depths of your soul!
As I write in all my writings: Tough times never last but tough people always do!
You have shown yourself to be the latter because you suvived all this pain and now chose to share it for the good of all mankind!
Keep writing from your soul for the good of all souls!
If you get a chance please read my story and poems. I think we have a lot in common!
Good luck with all oyur future writings!
Always a friend!
TIM

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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