Disillusioned

Disillusioned

A Poem by jen -- JG
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First time I admitted my feelings here....

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Disillusioned

 

 

 

 

You came

 

 

 

 

 

You Saw

 

 

 

You Conquered

 

 

Then you walked away

 

 

 

 

 

AND NOW I’M BLOODY PISSED!

 

 

 

 

© Copyright jen-JG 7 August 2008

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 jen -- JG


Author's Note

jen -- JG
anything you wish to say - honesty is good.

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Oh, wow. I know that feeling too. Like when your little brother jumps on you, waking you up from the most wonderful dream you've ever had and then yelling in your ear so that when he leaves it's impossible to remember the dream at all, except that it was wonderful. Keep it up; I totally didn't see that ending coming at all! Thanks for the rare originality!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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