A  Cold or What...........

A Cold or What...........

A Poem by jen -- JG
"

a fun write to cheer my sniffles........

"

A Cold or What?

 

A cold it isn't

the flu it is not

My nose is runnin'

my forehead is hot

I feel so awful

don't know what I got.

But a big jar of Vicks

and a large whisky - hot

will make me feel better

will sure hit the spot-

and soon I won't care

just what I have got!

 

© Copyright

© 2008 jen -- JG


Author's Note

jen -- JG
a bit of fun to cheer up a cold - say whatever you like - I can take it

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Ady
I thought that this was a very fun piece.
Nicely done, especially considering how crappy you must have been feeling when you wrote this.
I am such a crab when I am sick, that I do not think that I would be able to compose anything even half as cheerful as this. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


lol, a fun write :-)

If the Vicks doesn't do it, the whiskey will! I heard that whiskey, lemon and honey is an old remedy.



Posted 16 Years Ago


"I'll drink to that!"

Hope you feel better, Jen!!!!!!

Celia

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 25, 2008

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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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