Just a -- Blur

Found the BLUR contest too late to enter- - but wrote the poem anyway - hope you enjoy................

Just A -- Blur

 

 

My love for you is just a blur

You are behaving like a cur

You broke my heart

Now we must part

So go away – my unkind Sir.

 

Oh, come on now, my unkind Sir

It’s you who made my life a blur

Own up at least

You’ve been a beast

Behaving like a half-baked cur.

 

You say you’re not a half-baked cur

I beg to differ – unkind Sir

For far to long

You done me wrong

Now life with you is-- just a blur.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG18/03/2008

Author's Note

a bit of fun for a contest I was too late to enter -- enjoy --tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Ady]

This is very cute. What is the name for this style of poetry?

[Norma J. Jessee]

I think this is the cutest, light-hearted poem I've read in awhile. It's funny on a serious note.

Loved it.