Goodbye To Me

Goodbye To Me

A Poem by Jem Sagcal
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Where did it all go?

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Goodbye to Me

Where did it all go?
The days when you waved and said Hello?
Why did you have to leave?
And left me crying in my sleep? 

Refrain:

I miss those days when it was you and me
Lying down under the old oak tree
This independence is driving me crazy

Chorus:

I beg you now, come back to me
Under those skies where we laughed all day
That night, I asked you to stay
Forever you said we would be
So why’d you say, goodbye to me
Goodbye to me

Why did you say
Goodbye to me

I held my heart so tight
As I waited for the moonlight
You caressed me with your hand
And said we would be together again

[Refrain]
[Chorus]

© 2013 Jem Sagcal


Author's Note

Jem Sagcal
During my 3rd year, I wrote a poem during my Calculus class. One of my best friends, who now currently takes Music in University decided to give it a melody, and this song became known throughout my batch.

It was also the first poem I ever shared with my friends.

So, it holds a lot of memories and I am quite proud of my friend for making it into an awesome song.

So if you'd like to hear it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xyJslIQ3ybw

I would also love to know what you think about it!

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I heard it. I love the song. Congratulations to you and the one who arranged it.
Keep writing songs like this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow so sweet, :) love how you expressed those sweet words. It is amazing, a brilliant write. I can relate in this story. Very good song. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jem Sagcal

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for seeing it that way! Truly appreciated!
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Pax
a song...awesome!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jem Sagcal

11 Years Ago

Thank you for finding it awesome, Kuya Pax!
Oh my god.
Lovely song! >.<
Your notes on the song were pretty high *_*
It's a song to be heard :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jem Sagcal

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Well, it was my friend who made into a song in the first place, and she's reall.. read more
Wow! very very well written! felt the emotion and power behind your words and stanzas!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jem Sagcal

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is so sweet, I love the way every line connects gracefully to the next!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jem Sagcal

11 Years Ago

Thank you for seeing that way and for the review!

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