Whatever

Whatever

Whatever our past maybe,

Whatever the walls our hearts may build,

Whatever be the distance,

I'll still and always will be here.

Whatever you say or do,

Whatever the lie or truth,

Whatever the right or wrong,

I'll still and always will be here for you.

Whatever you may think of me,

Whatever the hurt that caused me tears,

Whatever may matter,

I'll still and always will be here.

Reviews

[Tex]

Jem,

This is a remarkable write. Very positive, I just love the way you use repetition of the "Whatever" a truly loving poem. this could be enclosed in a Valentine.

Great job.

thanks for taking a look at my stuff ;-)

btw i like your art work... do you make it yourself?

[Jem Sagcal]

Thank you so much for this feedback. :D

Abd yes, I did draw it myself, thank you :D

[Tex]

well then I am REALLY impressed! A Poet and an Artist. Wow!

[Pax]

wow... your the ever strong person's freind/lover/parent will always be there for a love one...
heartfelt write Great!!!

[}Echo{]

This is really cool. Your a good writer.

[WingsToFly]

This is one sweet poem, nicely written.