A Loves Death

not entirely sure if this qualifies as a poem its more of a personal rant that rhymes i guess

When love dies everybody asks why

Most of us answer this question with a lie

Others choose words that remain unspoken

Perhaps this way hearts remain unbroken

 

Everybody needs an explanation

No one wants to hear a work of fiction

Most of us want.. No need to hear the truth

It is as if the pain reason can soothe

 

Sometimes we forget how much truths can hurt

Our grief renders our broken hearts inert

We believe everything must have reasons

Obsessing over this sometimes takes seasons

 

We forget love does not mix with logic

It’s more related to the word magic

Reasons for why love dies may not exist

Why against all odds sometimes it can persist

 

Love is a mysterious phenomenon

Uncharted like the river amazon

It is quite a beautiful emotion

So unpredictable like the ocean

 

The existence of a valid question

Means not there’s an answer in connection

Some questions in life doesn’t have answers

Don’t lose sight, the things that really matters

 

Why it rains is not really important

Why the changes in season are constant

The why behind these things is not meaningful

Compared to how they are so beautiful

 

Why how and when love dies we often ask

Answering these questions is quite the task

Why how and not even from where it’s from

Answers to these questions may never come

 

How vital is the reason why love dies

 Is it enough a reason where one cries

Why does the reason of loves death matter

Honoring its existence would be better

 

Everybody deserves explanation

But its absence should not cause frustration

Love’s end is just another beginning

On you feet and cease your tears from falling

 

The sun has risen and a new day begins

In this life he who does not give up wins

Clean your salted cheeks and open your heart

Perhaps now a new love story shall start

 

 

Reviews

[Tangledrevelations]

Astounding,this well whatever this is I guess you could call it a speech perhaps a speech about life,love and acceptance ,it is clear and strong and truthful not a lot of people out there care about the truth anymore,glad to see some still do.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Every words are explaining "how" and "Why" really shouldn't matter anymore cause life has much more sunshine to follow and we can't complain to love because what happens it's not necessary that will happen all the time and with everyone ..all we have to do is look forward and that's what make this poetry "GORGEOUS "
.. I wish i could deliver this poem to every broken heart or future broken hearts ..very nice :)

[Cool Girl]

Who cares ifits a poem or not, I like it! Maybe you just invented a whole new type of poem:) I do like the way it flows, and I'm happy to be first to reveiw it. I do hope things turn out well:)