Romantic Musings

I do not know where this is going

But to follow it I am willing

The thought of you has inspired me to write

So please if you find out do not elude my sight

 

What I write is what i feel

And I beleive that it is real

I am not asking you to love me back

But I will ask you what it is that I lack

 

Well this has been something

A result of what I was thinking

With a though of you in my mind

An inspiration, a reason or perhaps a smile i can always find

Author's Note

another one from my highscool days

Reviews

[Androglossia]

char! high school jeeed? ga agiv na diay you pag high school jemaral? haha, nice one. Your linguistic style is very simple and it created an impression of effectiveness. You're good at rhyming I must say. However since you applied your rhyming skill on this write, be careful with proper usage of lines in a stanza because they separate, compare or contrast thoughts expressed in different units particularly where the poem needs to be written in a formal metrical pattern.