Brightest Star

Right now I'm sitting on dull memories,
Living a death as people often do.
But I don't want to shrivel up yet,
Or let these moments escape me.

'Never knew true friendship like this,
While alone I feel useless
with you I feel boundless.

Right now I'm holding onto your dear hand,
Smiling at a tomorrow spent with you.
But you can't wait I bet,
Or let time grow between us.

'Never knew blue skies shone like this,
While alone I never saw this
Without you the world is groundless.

Reviews

[youngkingkwan]

So much sentiment. I love it, and I'm happy you have friends to bring this out in you. Bravo.

[Nyu]

I'm so glad too :D thank you so much for reading

[Shah Sabia]

This is too cute :)
Rise and Shine.

[Nyu]

:D thanks so much!

[wordman]

a sweet write,loved the image

[Nyu]

thank you for reading it x)

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This is so sweet! i loved it, excellent poem, "While alone I feel useless, with you I feel boundless" totally my favorite lines. Keep it coming :) i'm rating 100 points, and adding to my favorites.

[Nyu]

wow! thank you so much for the support x) I am happy you liked it that much. and yeah those are probably the lines I liked best too.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Emily]

I am in love with your fist lines!
Keep it up!

[Nyu]

aw thank you :)