Winning Never Ends

I am a fleeting fragment

Of an image of my perceived world.
I gather a breathe.
When walking with a regulating flow,
Life is movement itself.
I don’t have time to stop,
I don’t have investigate the evidence to prove lies are false.
There are so many ways to believe.

Don’t shut down a pile of little progressions.
Nothing is a waste.
Live and admit that life is your individual chance.
You will be by me and everyone’s side.
Until the day you leap for the edge in fear,
Shall you fall to the depths.

Its a new year and there is no such thing as fate.
Even if you get smart enough to hack through life,
it will bleed before your brain without meaning.
When you build up all your stamina,

You may find that the road ends when death is born.
In raising your material possessions to achieve security,
You will gain everything but what is free of domination.
You will never find your dreams coming true,
Until the day you choose to awaken.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good song and powerful poetry.
"You will never find your dreams coming true,
Until the day you choose to awaken."
The above lines are words to live by. When we are dormant in life. We are living for nothing. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Nyu]

So true, I completely agree with you. :) Thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Satan]

This is fantastic, I see a lot of myself in this piece.

[Nyu]

x) I'm glad you can relate, Satan heeheeh

[Roshan Nair]

A great write..you've composed this piece that posses incredible power and grit, the imagery just adds to the mysticism of the piece and narrator. Seize life by the throat, amazing theme again. cheers! :)

[Nyu]

Thank you so much! I am so happy that is comprises all the things you have mentioned. Means a lot to me :)

[Sami Khalil]

So much truth in this wonderful write and so many lines to quote...Bravo............

[Nyu]

Thank you so much :) that means a lot

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[C. Rose]

I like many lines in this piece "fleeting fragment" "don't have time to stop" "so many ways to believe" "leap for the edge in fear" 'smart enough to hack through life" "the road ends when death is born"

Should "have investigate" be "have to investigate"
"Its a new" should be "It's a new"

Thanks for sharing, this had a lot of bits of wisdom.

[Nyu]

glad you liked it

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

[Nyu]

Thank you so much, you inspire me x)

[Emily]

I makes my day to know I inspire you!

[Gerry Legister]

I love the leap of faith from the edge of fear, good work here

[Nyu]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[Michael G. Smith]

I know exactly what you mean. I merely saw the physical world until the day Christ helped me to see the spiritual side of all which is eternal beneath the cruel undertones of a dying world.

[Nyu]

I'm glad you understand :) Thanks for taking the time to connect with my writing again, it means a lot.