Sublime

Sublime

A Poem by Nyu

When that wind hit me on the coldest day,
I stood in it, held my body against the flowing force.
There was a new direction that even the wind could not predict.
Thank you for showing me how much I can thank the sun.
For all those times I swore under its heat
That I was destined to melt into nothingness,
I have learned to love.

Sometimes it feels like your look comes from outer space,
A deepness to your circular lens in which you discover me.
I can watch that twinkle of star.
There is a reflection of blue sky above its surface,
In your eyes that give me peace.
You told me one day that I could be anything.
Today I tell you that you are infinite.
From the days that I crawled at your feet,
To the ones that I turned to explore alone,
I will always warm my heart with your existence.
In my mind there is a treasure that persistently grows,
This is you and your lights effect on my tiny world. 

© 2015 Nyu


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Good song and very good poetry.
"In your eyes that give me peace."
I liked the honest tone in the poetry. You gave enough to create good place and situation. Best days in a life when someone make us feel safe and sound. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

9 Years Ago

x) Yeah safe and sound, I always want to be in that place with someone who I love. Thank you for rea.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Beautiful flow in the poem and good choice of words JELLYCAT . Thank you for sharing ' I have learned to love' my favorite line !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

9 Years Ago

x) aw thats so sweet of you, thank you very much!
Good song and very good poetry.
"In your eyes that give me peace."
I liked the honest tone in the poetry. You gave enough to create good place and situation. Best days in a life when someone make us feel safe and sound. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

9 Years Ago

x) Yeah safe and sound, I always want to be in that place with someone who I love. Thank you for rea.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
That's really incredible. The music you have paired with this piece gives it great depth. Really takes the reader on a rollercoaster of sadness & light.

Great piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and I am happy to make something that effected a reader - glad you got a feeli.. read more

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