Sublime

Sublime

A Poem by Nyu

When that wind hit me on the coldest day,
I stood in it, held my body against the flowing force.
There was a new direction that even the wind could not predict.
Thank you for showing me how much I can thank the sun.
For all those times I swore under its heat
That I was destined to melt into nothingness,
I have learned to love.

Sometimes it feels like your look comes from outer space,
A deepness to your circular lens in which you discover me.
I can watch that twinkle of star.
There is a reflection of blue sky above its surface,
In your eyes that give me peace.
You told me one day that I could be anything.
Today I tell you that you are infinite.
From the days that I crawled at your feet,
To the ones that I turned to explore alone,
I will always warm my heart with your existence.
In my mind there is a treasure that persistently grows,
This is you and your lights effect on my tiny world. 

© 2015 Nyu


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Good song and very good poetry.
"In your eyes that give me peace."
I liked the honest tone in the poetry. You gave enough to create good place and situation. Best days in a life when someone make us feel safe and sound. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

10 Years Ago

x) Yeah safe and sound, I always want to be in that place with someone who I love. Thank you for rea.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Beautiful flow in the poem and good choice of words JELLYCAT . Thank you for sharing ' I have learned to love' my favorite line !

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

10 Years Ago

x) aw thats so sweet of you, thank you very much!
Good song and very good poetry.
"In your eyes that give me peace."
I liked the honest tone in the poetry. You gave enough to create good place and situation. Best days in a life when someone make us feel safe and sound. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

10 Years Ago

x) Yeah safe and sound, I always want to be in that place with someone who I love. Thank you for rea.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
That's really incredible. The music you have paired with this piece gives it great depth. Really takes the reader on a rollercoaster of sadness & light.

Great piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nyu

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and I am happy to make something that effected a reader - glad you got a feeli.. read more

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