Inside Out

The concrete streets,

her concrete soul.

The flickering heat,

her flickering heart.

The passing cars,

her passing thoughts.

The countless rain,

her countless faces.

The fresh vegetables,

her fresh awakenings.

The clouded sky,

her clouded world.

A single sign,

her single look.

The flowing water,

her flowing life.

Author's Note

Reviews

[RoyRogers]

Wonderful Poem Jellycat. You are a great poet.

[Nyu]

Thank you so much :) ur an awesome friend!

[Emily]

I love the first!
You just don't see poems that start off like that!
Keep it up!

[Nyu]

Aw, thank you :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This is very well written. It's amazing, I liked reading this.

[Nyu]

Thank you very much ^_^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome.

[Yusuf Qaizar]

Its well written. Would like to read more.

[Nyu]

Thank you so much :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Love how the writer reflects the characters life from the world around her. A very unique poetic perspective.

[Nyu]

yeah..it was easy, fun. glad you liked it :)