Empty

Empty

A Poem by Nyu

Simple little girl,drenched in need,spiraling out of control,whenever the empty creeps in.
Feelings extended between the two;connecting.
The emptiness leaped away then and now its back
Opening her mouth for more,she welcomes with teeth the world,to join her in her body
so she could never be alone,it would never be dark then.
Standing on her own was an illusion and she knows it all too well.
That special one,with power on its own,it looked at her
and she tried to shine back,but she could only see it's light
She saw it all and shuddered..."that's beautiful"
but did not open the mouth,no devouring would she do.
There was something she could stand with,not in for once;
Waves change around her,but she had a new idea...
that they were only around her,not flowing through

© 2015 Nyu


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A beautiful and interesting poem with sound imagery. Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Nyu

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
I feel I am drowning in a vacuum as I read this melancholy.

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