stuck

all about the block that plants itself between the thoughts in my head and the ability to write down what they are... even this poem is old.... :)

Peanut butter, honey and molasses
My thoughts cling to the roof of my mouth
Not always palatable, always just within reach of my tongue
Constant and conspicuous but unyielding
A niggling, nagging reminder
Of that which is not yet ready to digest or dissolve
Will simply remain stuck

 

Author's Note

i have had some tid-bitty inspirations float through my head only to dissolve on impact like snow flake melting on the ground.... missing the flow of words and thought

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Oh yes. happen to me all the time, I want to shut something , I want to write, but only in the right time and place, thoughts connect to the right words and poem is born :) Yossi

[Jibey]

Sticky stuff in your mouth can be inspiring...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Thats was quite interesting little write... certainly a very creative way to describe feeling you can't explain or express for unknown reasons.