In Your Eyes

A Poem by Jeffery Hayes

I see your tears
Your tired soul.
Your broken heart.
In your eyes
I'm just another guy.

Your waiting for me to become
Another scar
On your already shattered heart
In your eyes
I'm just another heartbreak
Waiting to happen.
Babe that's no me.

In time I hope you will see
Look into my eyes
You will see
I am here to stay.

Let me be the one to mend your heart.
Let me be the reason you smile.
Take my hand.
I hope you know.
You'll never have to walk alone.

I hope one day
In your eyes
I won't be
Just another guy

© 2014 Jeffery Hayes

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Jax Franklin

Hi Jeffrey...
~~ I really like the premise of this poem...
~~ Just a couple of suggestions... Feel free to use or lose...
1) Typo: Babe that's no me // Edit Fix: Babe that's (not) me
2) I suggest on this stanza below that you edit one of the (you will see)... It will make for a smoother read and won't sound redundant...
In time I hope you will see // Look into my eyes // You will see // I am here to stay.
~~ Another good poem.... I enjoyed it..

Keep Smilin'... Jax

Posted 10 Years Ago

Sami Khalil

"Let me be the one to mend your heart.
Let me be the reason you smile.
Take my hand.
I hope you know.
You'll never have to walk alone."

A splendid read and write...Bravo...................