Like A Star

Looking up I smile.
Such a beautiful night.
Peaceful and calming
Slowly closing my eyes

Like a star
I'm falling
Faster but I'm not afraid.

Like a sinner
I fall to my knees and pray.
Lord show me the way.
Allow me to wake up
Another day...


Like a star
Someday I too will faid.
I will be but a dream.
In the back of your mind.
I will stay.

Like A Star.
Someday I will shine.
For the Lord is my everlasting light

Reviews

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

This poem crosses the world of real life, and the world of your dreams, i like it, it's a true masterpeice.

[Jeffery Hayes]

Thank you! I truly appreciate your compliment

[Stephen]

The poem's a combination of your life, all the activities whether it's your dreams, visions n whatever! You gathered the things n expressed your feelings to all n that's great to read it into a poetic form.

Keep up the great up!

[Jeffery Hayes]

Thank you. I have found that through my pies I can tell me story. Weather it be of my faith, love or pain.

[Stephen]

Pleasure! Ok! Well, if you want my suggestion then i'd suggest you to write a #novel or a #story write on it cus, it's gonna look awesome reading for readers if you do so..because it's all real cause your feelings real n much more so, you can write some big stuffs on it if you want to...the faith, love n pain, what a mixture of all these elements!

[Jeffery Hayes]

Its like a mixture of melodies. They blend so well as long as there is truth in the words. Trying to fake it would throw them out of balance

[Stephen]

Yeah, the truth's there! But I don't think, they'll throw the things outta the window if you write something big on it!
Anyway, it's your wish, what I wanted to do is suggest you cus, I liked the poem n thought to read something big on it in a new way! Anyway ... keep up the great work!

[Jeffery Hayes]

I have been thinking about it. I will try it out. I do write stories with character I create and draw. So I should be able to step away from my fantasy world and write something. Thank you for the suggestion and the support

[Stephen]

O' whao! Well, me too love writing stories n create characters in screenplays but my poor grammar always stumble me ... I hope with the time, i'll get relief from my poor grammar. Yeah, fantasy's not that bad but it always keeps us away from reality n which's not good for all of us so, I mostly try to write real but fantasy help us creating characters that we can put in examples to make the stories attractive reading n so on ... anyway, the pleasure's mine!

[Jeffery Hayes]

I tend to base my character's personalities off of people in my life. But putting those personalities into a fantasy character and worldm

[Stephen]

Yeah, me too do the same but not much cus, some stories needs to be real without imaginative characters...but yeah, your right, it's you know very helpful for stuffs to make 'em better reading cus, the combination of fantasy n the real character's what that bring an original stuff...it's now a days very tough to me to grab some time to work on my novels but i've planned to make some agendas of the day to bifurcate the time equally to all channels. So, do you have any particular genre in which you write your stuffs or you just write like me whatever hits on the mind?

[Jeffery Hayes]

I tend to base my character's personalities off of people in my life. But putting those personalities into a fantasy character and world

[Jeffery Hayes]

Its kinda a mixture. Its based on a war between two races (Phoenix and Drikers) the phoenix characters are mine. The drikens belong to my best friend. But I do most of the writing myself and she gives me ideas once in a while.

But the main event us the war that has been going on for 2000 years.
The 12 main characters are all totality. Some from the driken galaxy and some from the phoenix galaxy.the character based off of my personality is half Phoenix and half driken.
But anyway. These 12 are part of something that is the cause of the war. 12 keys. Which are spirits that use to be good until the charm bracelet that binds them together fell in the wrong hands. The keys need host to act. Now its up to the 12 to put an end to the war and the keys. But if they fail the keys will transfer to any off spring of its host. But they go for the child that is more like their host.

[Stephen]

Great to know! Am sure it's written in a science fiction genre n hey, if yet you haven't started working on it then go n start work on it cuase, your gonna break the record, I think! The theme, the concept's pretty impressive to read! I wish you luck for your great novel! :)
Keep it up!

[Stephen]

O' by the way, both characters're great but I love the "Phoenix" one! lol

[Jeffery Hayes]

I actually got one main story and 4 characters' stories I am working on. But the main story I want to waituntil my best friend moves back down before I get any further

[Stephen]

Ok! Sounds good!
I hope, your friend'd come back soon n i'd get an opportunity to read that great story from you!
O' by the way, is that story too'd be in Science fiction genre or in a real one? n would you love to give some description about the story, i'd love to know what the story about in short??

[stars are far]

You seem to be a religious person .. and you portrayed that well in your writings..
well done .. really thats amazing :)