Break Me Down

Life gets a little crazy
Every now and than

I struggle, slip, fall and
Stumble.
But I will not crumble.

Lord I hear you calling me
Your voice
Like lighting striking
Break me down.

So you build me back up
Making me a
Bettet me than
I use to be.
Break me down.
Build me back up from
Broken shattered pieces

I know you have always seen right through my strength.
Like glass trying to hide
All my fears and pain.
You seen right through
My walls.

You called out to me
I began shattering.
Breaking me down.

Reviews

[stars are far]

Your last stanza ..describing me.. well .. very well :(

well done poem :)
you're good !!

[Jeffery Hayes]

Thank you for all your kind words. I don't see my self as religious. I just have faith in the lord. I look at it as a relationship between the sinner and my savior

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That's so nice..and it is true :)
and my pleasure :)