Death Of Love.

This is about the intense pain caused due to the heartbreak.A salute to all those people who are carrying their life with this bouncing pain.

The mirrors of a angel's fall,
Don't seems to shade;
The version now cannot rock,
Now it seems to fade.
Now I am gonna peel,
I know I cannot heal;
From this uncertain death of love.
It is so me and now it so dull,
The shine is just trespassing away!

 

Now I just don't wanna live,
I am a fool,rather anyway!
I am flaming burnt,
Hurt so seriously, inside;
Its causing pain,
I dont know?
How long I can take this anymore?
My heart is now so sore,
And won't beat anymore.

 

I used to look at your shining ocean eyes,
And used to feel so good;
The gobbling feeling inside
Now I see, devil creeping out,
And Shouting over my head;
The tormenting tensions of red,
I am gonna burst it out,anyhow?
Don't worry about me,
I won't make you feel, ashamed.

 

Tell me who is to be blame?
Our affair is full of complaints;
This is me I wont change,
Atleast never for you;
Your love is just so lame.
But I cannot forget you.
Though I am free,
But I cannot breath in this open air.

 

I am gonna peel now,
I know I cannot heal now;
From this uncertain death of love.
It is so me and now it so dull,
The shine is just trespassing away!

 

Author's Note

Please ignore the grammar section and new ideas are always welcomed!

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

I love the imagery you put into your writing, always so vivid and always directed at a certain part of your senses or emotions. Very well written.

Luna

[deeps]

Such emotion and depth in this write.
Raw emotion i mean, Very well written
And descriptive.