A Beautiful Girl!

This is a poem about the first sight love, And the imagination of mind which works in a fraction of second when we look at the beauty; anywhere, in supermarket, streets etc.

The story is long enough to tell you,

But its wonderful, because;

Somebody said those three magical words,

I love you;

But I have a part that I need to tell you,

To remind you,I have never been a narrator;

and I am a bad orator!

 

The story starts with a picture of a boy,

Who stands in a corner of a room;

His feelings are lonely and gloom,

He has no friends; life is straight for him;

Which never ends,

However, things are changing for him, he just don't know;

There is a spark of magic in the air, he won't know!

 

A voice of a girl strike his ear, "excuse me,hi!"';

He turns around to see,

Who is this beautiful girl with so cuckoo voice?

He gasps; and utters a unexplained hi,

That is when the love angels shoot him;

With their love arrow in his heart,

The feeling was anomalous;

Which cannot be explained in the lines of word?

 

Oh! my god he whispers to himself,

As he witness the life in slow motion;

Girl caring her hairs when her hairs covering her face,

In a whirly wind, struggling to put them back in place;

Blinking her eyes so smoothly;

Moments like this are none in lifetime,

For this moment again;

I would take thousand roman spears in my chest,

Moreover, defy the power of immortality and invincibility;

 

There are daydreams, which last forever,

He entered in it, without any missing shot;

This feeling is hard to explain,

Metal melts, but still its calorific is not enough to gain;

 

It was like a first stretch of morning,

The windy weather before the rain;

The thunder on a bright day,

Suppose a life before time!

 

He walked towards her and grabbed her love handle,

Gently looking deep into her eyes;

She shied, as if she was nodding to the words of love,

She screams in her silence, Kiss me dear;

When you are so near,

 

He runs his hand above to her side chest;

And give her a promise kiss,

And ends with biting her lower lips;

The kiss made him dissolved,

Made his brain revolute and revolve;

 

There she smiled with those devil's looks,

Then she clinched her tasty lips;

The view was so lethal to see,

He kept his hands on her cheek;

To watch every glimpse of her,

He moved his hands near;

 

Feeling their palms together; coming closer,

Touching their nose to each other;

He whispered to her I Love You,

Softly in her ears!

 

He then moved away;

And looked those lips of an angel,

Studying them precisely;

Then she swayed and moved away,

Leaving him alone with sad smile on her face;

She turned around, killing him softly,

 

Endlessly touching his hands, she moved away;

With the last touch of her finger tip,

She visited to the sunset and he was whipped;

The blur was now so clear,

It had been a fraction of seconds in this worthy world;

 

Then she caught the glimpse of his and smiled politely,

He had to take a chance for not to say, If; on some future morning;

However, he was not determined; he was sweating high,

With legs shivering and heart beating loud;

I suppose it was saying then it's a goodbye,

 

It was the moment when he knew;

The mysterious feeling inside him,

And understood; he was savagely in love with her;

His miserable life had a vision of duty,

To fall in love with such a sublime beauty;

He could smell the tenacious Perfume,

From the warmth of her body;

Glorifying the mind and the senses,

Suddenly and savagely;

 

He reached near by her side;

Staring deep in her crystal clear eyes,

And said "hey! You are a Beautiful girl".

And that is how the journey of love album ends;

With two of them holding each other's hands,

Sitting on sunset viewpoint on a lonely bench!

Author's Note

I suggest you to read this poem,keeping the best romantic photograph in your mind or setting the perfect blend of mood of romance. It makes the meaning beautiful.Please ignore the grammar section and new idea is always welcomed!

Reviews

[Mark]

a lovely poem with lots of potential. but like a beautiful moment in life it can be spoiled by things getting in the way. like chloe the other reviewer said there are multiple occaisions where word choice gets muddy instead of a clear beautiful night the message gets lost and it's lunchtime or something.
once again though beautiful ideas and organization just go back through and examine each piece in relation to each other and try to make the words flow more organically :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

i didnt have to form a romantic photograph as you wrote it so well i could see it clearly .. i think the entire poem is so lovely and romantic ... love at first sight .. you made it so real .. beautiful.
only one idea or word change you used catched in this ..
Then she catched the glimpse of his and smiled politely ... caught is the word .. still the meaning is there and lingers .. a love poem of the utmost
Chloe
xoxo