Tears

This is a about a person who ask his love to give him a chance as he has felt the emptiness in her absence.

Lets count with the blood shed eyes,
I watch you drowning;
Tell me, If I could crawl around you?
To save you from something wrong;
Would you hold my death defying wet song,
For you I would walk through, wrong direction;

The smile is melting, with that blunder wax flowing,
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me;
And you burn my world again!
Can't stop hearing the sound,so paranoid I get;
Feels like suppose they drop on my side,
When I close my eyes;

I am not breathing, guess what might be the reason?
Smile please! Don't let them fall again;
They are so precious, makes me feel so ferocious,
Your cry feels like thunder,which conceals my heart under;
Be completely mad at me; I never understood whats been the tragedy?

Now I wont wait to hold your tears;
Give me a chance,a resurrection,
lets start again;with no more sorrow;
You are my inspiration and my respiration,
No more I want to say goodbye;

Time wants me to be what you want me to be,
Don't know what you expecting of me;
I am crushing beneath now,
I want your love, Not sympathy;
I was not leading,I have always been lost and bleeding,
Just let it go,once for and all;

I will make things alright,
With shiny stars,dark moon and bright night;
Because your tears don't fall,they crash around me!

Author's Note

There are certain lines I took from a song, What I feel is that those lines complete the meaning of this poem! and as usual please ignore the grammar section and new ideas are always welcomed!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

No ideas just saying this was a piece i found to be amazing and I can't understand how no one else never commented on it. Your imagery? perfection! I felt it, that's what one is supposed to do on a piece. be inside with the words, feel them, roll with them, I did and more! No I would not change a thing.
Just keep it up.. Loved it!

Mags xx