First touch.
A Poem by Jamie Coffey
As ot lips graze,
as our hands tremble,
the first touch,
always the sweetest.
© 2009 Jamie Coffey
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Aww. I like it.
Posted 15 Years Ago
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i think you could combine all three of the things you have and have a really nice poem of a decent length. good job on ur writing
Posted 15 Years Ago
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It leaves an imprint on your mind. Ot. Ot. Ot.
Posted 15 Years Ago
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This is good. Just one mistake though. 'ot'. I'm not sure what that's supposed to be, but you might want to fix it. haha. Good job!
Posted 15 Years Ago
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This is sweet and sincere.
Posted 15 Years Ago
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Added on July 22, 2009
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