First touch.

As ot lips graze,

as our hands tremble,

the first touch,

always the sweetest.

Reviews

[Rae]

Aww. I like it.

[Kayleen]

i think you could combine all three of the things you have and have a really nice poem of a decent length. good job on ur writing

[H]

It leaves an imprint on your mind. Ot. Ot. Ot.

[Ben]

This is good. Just one mistake though. 'ot'. I'm not sure what that's supposed to be, but you might want to fix it. haha. Good job!

[deeps]

This is sweet and sincere.