Why We Break

I wrote this about 3 years ago. I was very angsty at this point

Truth is, we are all broken

We are all in pieces at some point

We've all been there

And sure, we may have gotten back up

But it doesn't change the fact that

We will never be full, whole, or fixed

If we were, we would be closer to perfection

A trait that no one has ever truly been

Maybe, that's why we all break

And since we are all broken

We're meant to find other people, other broken pieces

And with them, pull through this maze of life

We would never be able to make it alone

I believe, that is why we have love

And me,

I'll love every single broken piece of you

Maybe you can find somewhere in your broken heart to do the sane

Two negatives equal a positive

So our broken pieces can come together...

We can be broken together

Reviews

[A. Wrin]

Honestly, I think this is beautiful. It didn't need to rhyme. It captures the heart with honesty, realness. It's true. We've all felt broken at least once, been broken. I think my favorite part is the end where you come out reaching towards someone as if saying its okay to be that way and that you'd love them anyways. The structure is easy to follow and it flows quite nicely. Very good job :)