Rose Promise

just a little thing for some contest

Red blue green yellow and orange bound with silken ribbons, delecate and fragrant.The music begins soft and slow calling them forth in steady procession.Moist joy escapes and caresses each petal making it glisten as the love engulfs them and they become more than a rose, they become a promise.

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the red-rose contest!

[Destinee]

this is so beautiful. I love this line: "they become more than a rose, they become a promise."
also, if you are sending this in for a contest you might want to change "fragrent" to fragrant and "then" to than, it would be a shame for this awesome write to be marked down for some silly spelling errors.