White Hot Love

Just describing the love I feel for my special man.

 

 

Like coals of white-hot fire,

This love inside of me,

Burning brighter, hotter still;

Deeper than the mighty sea

 

Flames leap higher, higher,

Within this heart of mine,

To share one single kiss;

To taste your love divine,

 

The burning flames of love,

Raging, out of control,

My body yearns and aches;

For you control my soul.

 

I hunger for your  touch,

I tremble at your name,

Flames of love, raging wild;

And only you, can tame.

 

Reviews

The passion and love you get when you read this another great piece
kewel
lionman

[Ladysue]

Oh what a sultry passionate piece you have written here. You know I love it! Very beautiful and touching!!!

[David Lewis Paget]

Your touch becomes more sure with every poem, your rhythms tighter and penned with a confidence that I haven't really seen until now. You have obviously bowed to the discipline of rhyme and metre, and are now beginning to reap the rewards. Keep it up, Norma Jean.
David.

[Antony]

Awwwwwwwww! Norma, what a beutiful tribute to your one and only, It is all so heartfelt. The love you express is awesome, each and every word can be felt by the reader.

Tony

[THE LOST ROSE]

If I was your man I would want T-shirt with this printed on it for all other men to see that my woman loves me. What a great tribute to your special man. I enjoyed the flow aof the simple but powerful speaking piece. Enjoy those grandbabies. Come visit me sometime at my house.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh this is hot to the touch with such love and passion, now this is truly a wonderfully well done love poem, i can't even pick out a favorite stanza for the whole thing is on fire.

[Fran Marie]

Flames leap higher, higher,

Within this heart of mine,

To share one single kiss;

To taste your love divine



What a lovely piece of love you have penned~ words straight from the heart with

such deep devotion for your mate~ WeLL DonE!! Jessee~

Fran