If The Morning Ever Comes

Lyric's

Night time creeps upon me slowly,

And the lonely's get me down.

As I think of all the love,

You've been passing around.

So, I pour myself another drink,

I won't stop until I'm numb.

And I'll get over you,

If the morning ever comes.

 

If the morning ever comes,

And the light comes shining through.

I can see things more clearly then,

And I'll get over you.

 

Night time holds to many memories,

Of the love I shared with you.

There are many shades and color's

But the lonelyest is blue.

So I sit alone in darkness,

With my memories and my rum.

And I'll get over you,

If the morning ever comes.

 

Reviews

[David Lewis Paget]

I hope this isn't true, but whether it is or not, you've dealt with the theme remarkably well. Everyone who has experienced that type of relationship at least once in their lives will identify with you, sitting in the dark, thinking furiously about the present and the past, and whiling away the midnight hours until the breaking dawn. Heartbreaking stuff, with a feeling of honesty about it that predisposes the reader to believe that this is the narration of actual experience, not fiction. DLP

[vanishing]

Norma, you have lovely talent
this writing is beautifully written
I find your passionate words
to be softly transfixing
Drinking sarrows away
purely classic in design and imagery
I enjoyed reading this poem!

[jen -- JG]

a "somebody done somebody wrong" type of song - good country song lyrics here, but then again it could also have a damn good blues beat. Wish I could write music.

Well done.

jen-JG

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This is good. I liked that I could almost hear the music that should go with this poem as I read. I thought the words you wrote were perfect. Great poem for those who have ended a relationship!!

[James K. Blaylock]

I really loved this piece. I could feel that free flowing human sorrow... through-out!

jkb

[Antony]

Hey Norma, I like the crying in the bottle poem, one of my practices. LOL Great rhyme scheme and the self pity drips onto the page, if this is true, you have my deepest sympathy. If I feel your pain, it is a job well done.
Antony