Bubbles

Written for my grandson, Caleb. His personality was so bubbly and he loved bubbles. So I nic-named him " Bubbles "

Bubbles, bubbles, everywhere,

In the grass, and in my hair,

In the air and in the tree;

Bubbles, bubbles, all over me.

 

Bubbles, bubbles floating free,

Bouncing, sparkling for all to see,

But one stands out from all the rest;

And I love that bubble best.

 

Bubbles laughing, Bubbles dancing,

Bubbles hiding, Bubbles prancing,

Bubbles, bubbles, brings me joy;

Gan Gan loves her Bubble boy.

 

Play with Bubbles and you'll see,

All the joy he brings to me,

Bubbles is laughter, a heart full of joy;

Bubbles is Gan Gan's baby boy.

 

 

Reviews

[Jessica{is inspired by ..]

That is so cute! I have a cousin named Caleb this made me think of him. This poem is very fun and light-hearted and I truly enjoyed reading it. It was a break from what most people write (myself included). It's not everyday you find a bubbly (pun intended) poem like this one. Thanks for sharing this.

Jessica

[Michael X]

norma, in design of this poem, your heartfelt rhyming is supurb, as well as colorfully creative,
which enhances the subtle blissfulness behind the meaning, your inspiration, your grandson,
in that loving aspect alone, your words are delightful, vibrant, and creates spontantious
feelings of happiness, projected as a fun read, and really captures the reader in moments
of joy, i love how the form itself has a bubble nature in way of wording, design, very well done.

[Vanessa Whiteley]

Ah, this is so cute. It retains that lovely childlike quality and is light and airy, just right for a poem intended for a little boy. He looks really bubbly in the photograph too.

[Sean Allen]

I'll agree with many of the reviewers, my grandson in named Caleb too, so it must be getting to be a popular name. Now Bubbles on the other hand, that name is unique and he will probably keep it all his life!
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[Gordon Greene]

And he would spread that joy to others. But never to the extent of when he lights up the face of his grandmother... It's a beautiful thing!
My youngest is a Caleb and he can bring us joy just like what you describe here (like my other two).
I like what this is in the first... a cute and happy poem. But I especially love how you turn those bubbles into a real life little boy.

Gordon

[Gypsy Butterfly]

awwwww so cute, bubbles in my hair, bubbles everywhere, child like fun, im goin to run in the rain kinda stuff ;)

[Virginia L. Wyatt]

I LOVE this poem. As I was reading it my heart was melting. It reminded me of my 4-yr-old nephew and my mother. You have great flow and rythm. I wouldn't change a thing!

[Ashley]

this is such a cute poem and i love the flow to it

very nice =]
and bubbles are fun =op

[James K. Blaylock]

i really loved your poem. it is so beautifully sweet. keep up the great writes.

[V. Lucien Maier]

wonderfully written. you have great flow and structure.
I would not change a thing.